~do i really know what happen in heart
do i really love or i am been tared apart
i don't know if i Love or hate,
i feel so helpless driven by fate~

those lines r just amazing! i think every1 can relate 2 them. u expressed feelings in this poems that r usally 2 hard 2 put in2 words. amazing job! 19/5 =)
xoxo
~waiting~

Good poem xx

I love this poem

Love and hate , those strongly formed words
in them they resume the story of this world

Starting is very touching
infact whole poem is well written

a vote for u
Biya

This poem overall is well written!
I love it!!
Keep writing...
just watch out for your spelling ;)

Aside from a few grammatical and spelling errors a very good poem.

do i really know what happen in heart
do i really love or i am been tared apart
i don't know if i Love or hate,
i feel so helpless driven by fate

I like the last line, it leaves no definite ending showing a resolution, it leaves it open, making it seem like theres more to it, allowing the reader to use their imagination more.

good work.

It's ok
so bad i can't write in arabic here i would love to sand you a poem about this subject
i 'am not a critic but i need to say this to you
we don't write cause we want to
but because we need to
that's why being a poet had never turned to a real job
....... you go it

Good but hard to get at first
keep up the good work!