The man I used to be

Great job. I think a few of the lines could be reworded or moved around. Other than that it's great.

Really good,you had me caught until the end because I didn't know how it would end.
Good job,keep it up=, :]
5/5

What i loved about your poem was the order in which things and feelings come: depression - then "i miss u" - then "i miss the man i used to be"
that is intriguing and makes the poem deep
and awwwww forgot to say the way you talk about yourself in the first face and in the third, like here:
"But I hope HE won't be lost for eternity,
Because I miss the man I used to be..."
---- it is a great way to express the complete change you feel in yourself
there were some metaphors i really loved, like
"There's a star trying to guide me out,
I am left with a question,
Should I follow it or not? I have a doubt"
i thought the rhythm was a bit off in some places, for example
"Especially when you still live inside my h
heart..."
i suggest changing it into something like:
Especially if you're still inside my heart...
but emmmmmm that was just a thought:)
kay i really loved your poem because it is greatly written and the message - which matters the most - is deep. i think i can relate because sometime ago i realized that i had used to be a different person untill something changed me..... so your poem is kind of a poem-that-makes-you-think:)
5/5

It was good. It started off and I was thinking to myself 'Another love poem...' They all seem to be so similar these days...
However, towards the end there was the great twist of you missing yourself, I really liked it and it was an inspiring read. Thankyou.
Sole. x

Waw you got great work i love it and i know how you feel as i feel it too,my favoraite :It is the only memory I have of you,
The only thing I can't just let go,
I don't care if I'm lost,
Losing you was my biggest cost...
waw flow is nice and rhyme too well done 5/5