by Poet on the Piano Apr 26, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I am really full of love, |
Maybe It's because this isn't the style of poetry i normally read, but this seemed a bit bland. Well written with a flow, indeed, but I wouldn't say its anything brilliant.. |
This poem is very profound. I like it very much. You definitely showed who you are and it showed a message that everyone needs to look within themselves to figure out exactly who they are. Good work! Keep it up! |
Perfect rhyme with respect for individuality |
by Krysten
Altho simple you got you point across easily. i loved it. i really enjoyed it b/c its about being who you are, and thats the way ive always lived my life. keep up the good job. the flow was good, i loved the rhyming alot and wel 5/5. |
by NinjaGirl
A truly touching piece of poetry 5/5 |