Comments : Holy Union

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very nice sentiment and great words to live by. I liked your poem and its message, what more could one ask for?

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    I enjoyed your words even though I normally refrain from religious themes it was well done. I was wondering if in the first stanza last line you meant "of the Truth"? I felt it read better that way to me. I appreciated your knowledgeable comments on my words"Marriage A&B"..been there, done that, but no T-shirt.