Comments : Eye Of The Storm

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I really like this, and you had a very eye-catching title! I loved your rhyming scheme and every line was so well put.

    "I start to walk back home,
    A place where I'll still be alone.
    I'll just lay in my bed,
    And wait for what lies ahead."

    Nice job with stating your emotions and what you truly feel.

    Thanks for the comment and keep writing!