Short and to the point. I totally agree with this poem, love is not just kissing or sex, its so much more than most of us think. Good work keep it up.

Your poem is in consonance with the rhythm of the heart and it leaves a deep and lasting impression. I have tried to develop the same theme further in the following sonnet that I dedicate to you:

Love is not a kiss or sex,
Love is not a muscle flex;
It is just a heart's reflex,
Distrust always love annex.

Don't tax too much your love,
Don't make it a greedy dove;
Love's nest is treasure trove,
Love's integrity is all above.

Love is not a craze for car
It's steadfast as pole-star;
Love doves are never at war,
Real love is never bizarre.

Don't make your love complex,
When in love you never vex.

Truly said... thanks for sharing sum true thoughts thru this wonderful SONNET...that lot of folks still misunderstand love for... U have said in so little words so much... u have showed d meaning of true love...

Great sonnet BIYA, keep it up...

Best wishz..
karan

Truly said... thanks for sharing sum true thoughts thru this wonderful SONNET...that lot of folks still misunderstand love for... U have said in so little words so much... u have showed d meaning of true love...

Great sonnet BIYA, keep it up...

Best wishz..
karan

Oh i love this!!! its great!!!!!
5/5
~shelby*dawn

What a beautifull poem , bravo , bravo , nothign more i can say , very nice said ,
very nice said

This is good and so true...if only certain ppl actually believed that

"Love is not kiss or sex
Love is really something else"

Perfect start, So true, such honesty such innocence I love it.

"Be sure whether you lust or love
As Love is as spiritual as dove"

Again so true, I love your honesty. And I like how you keep up with a rhyme scheme its very good.

"Love is not kiss or sex
Love is really something else"

I like your repetition here, its at the start and at the middle. I like the fact that your reminding readers which is good. Great consistency.

"Love is not kiss or sex
Love is really something else

Being in love you remain no more egoistic
While bearing every pain you feel elastic

Love is not mere kiss or sex
Love is indeed something else "

I like how your repeating it again, It was just the right amount. And your innocence in this was very good. It was sweet and I loved reading this. It was an amazing poem. Keep it up! You should check out some of my poetry sometime :D

Walekum asalam ! and Yes ..Thank you ..
Peace

Awww amazing and wonderfully written and very truthfully said an done,,,you have penned the emotions and your message very strong and well in this fantastic poem,,,you seem to me a great poet and I am very delighted to read this poem it has touched my heart so well,,thank u thank u thank you I love love love loved this poem
Just magnificent and splendid job well done :D 10/10