I really love this poem! It's so well written and it's one that many people can relate to. A broken friendship is hard to fix and more than that, it's hard to come to terms with a friendship that begins to tear apart. It's like a part of you is being ripped away and this emptiness takes its place. But none the less this is very well written. Keep it up! 5/5

Thank you for your comment hope your encouragement will make me to write nice poems

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