Wow. this is really good.! keep up the good work =]

This reminds me of my own life. guys can be romantic one day but then a total jerk the next!

i like this poem..alot

good job =]

A story that is told ovr and over with different words and different medium, but here told fairly well. I would recommend a reread and see if you could get the rythm to stay in one area without bouncing about. Do you mean to utilize grammar that is off?("broke" for "broken")