by Britt Apr 27, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Everything is lost, but then you find it |
by Loisa
Omg dude i likes this one 2 :) "we were only falling apart..." love it!!!! |
by Britt
Okayy bella, thankss... hmm... how exactly do you think i should improve my structure? any suggestions?? anyone? I would love to imprve. |
by Nawa
The emotions and feelings in this poem are expressed in a nice way, but I also think you should work on the structure. |
by Britt
Thanks Random Hero. I'll keep that it mind. =) |