Fallen apart...

by Britt   Apr 27, 2008


Everything is lost, but then you find it
if it didnt bother to show up then dont mind it

It's just a lost cause anyways, you've had your share of better days.

I'm admitting this with a heavy heart because some say love is a work of art. We're not falling in love.........
... we're just falling apart all that's lost is a loss of heart.

Although i loved you then and i stilll do now......We've seem to have fallen apart somehow....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loisa

    Omg dude i likes this one 2 :) "we were only falling apart..." love it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Britt

    Okayy bella, thankss... hmm... how exactly do you think i should improve my structure? any suggestions?? anyone? I would love to imprve.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    The emotions and feelings in this poem are expressed in a nice way, but I also think you should work on the structure.

  • 16 years ago

    by Britt

    Thanks Random Hero. I'll keep that it mind. =)