Thanks Random Hero. I'll keep that it mind. =)

The emotions and feelings in this poem are expressed in a nice way, but I also think you should work on the structure.

Okayy bella, thankss... hmm... how exactly do you think i should improve my structure? any suggestions?? anyone? I would love to imprve.

Omg dude i likes this one 2 :) "we were only falling apart..." love it!!!!