Aw that was sweet. :) It's nice to see you're fighting back so hard to win her again.
Yay! I only saw a few mistakes! Woo! Does victory dance* ^_^
Just let me know if you don't really care for anything to be corrected. Some people like it, others don't really care. Just let me know if you don't care. Hey, less typing for me. ^_^
I have to many memories that have stoped,
It's too, and stopped.
Gar, the thing logged me off so after I read it I couldn't edit as I went and I don't feel like looking for the other three mistakes. I'm just sleepy and splah. :P
Anyways. It was a sweet poem. I'll give it a four.