Good. i like it:)

Great thought, superb flow and marvellous composition with perfect flow. kEEP IT UP.

Good talent you have. this is a very good poem. 5/5.

Hi Good poem on a good topic, but i believe this a short one, plz add few more lines, if possible.
But still a good attempt :)

Very good poem. I do not normally like repetition but it works very well for this poem. The wording was great and so was the flow. I gave it a 5/5.

* Time is so short, yet so precious...it's the one who heals the inside wounds. Nice poem u right u showed in this poem "time is everything" and very important!

This is good.. && so true :)
Keep up the great job!!

[chris&caro]

This is good.. && so true :)
Keep up the great job!!

[chris&caro]

This is the message you sent me. you did really good on it. your a gifted writer at a young age. keep on writing and im sure you'll do something amazing with it =]

Really like it!!!
It's hard to believe that you're only 11...