Comments : Fobidden any Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is good well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    In an odd way i can kind of feel this because im in a similar situation. There's a guy that i really like and he really likes me but he gang bangs and i don't like gang bangers but i didn't know he was a gang banger at first and then his hood and my brothers hood are enemies so he couldn't come around anyway so i love ur poem its great well written 5/5