God's Gift.

by Daisy   Apr 27, 2008


Her name was whispered,
Gave joy to those who knew,
She was God's Creation,
Of which she prayed to.
Her hair was sunlit gold,
Her eyes as brown as wood,
Her lips were rosy red,
A angel she could,
Be, as she was,
God's Creation.
She cared for the poor and sick,
Gave them money of her own,
Made money of of candlewick.
So when her days were over,
She happily went up,
To her heaven,
And God's creations.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaLuvzYoo

    Lovely.......good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Crahan

    You are a talented writer. Make sure to stick with it so you keep your skills nice and sharp. This poem was very sweet and touched my heart. 5 out of 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very sweet poem... I really loved it...

    "Her hair was sunlit gold,
    Her eyes as brown as wood,
    Her lips were rosy red,
    A angel she could,"

    ^^ these lines are very beautiful....

    very good... keep up..

  • 16 years ago

    by shivali

    Its a beauti ful poem

  • 16 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    A good work. I suggest a small moderationas follows:
    An Angel she could be,
    As she was God's creation.

    You have the talent.

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