Well done xx

If this is true, I'm am so sorry! No one should be treated like that! Great poem though... good emotion and phrasing. Nice gentle flow. You wrote it so well that its like a story and I know exactly what happened. Good images! I wouls make this poem into stanzas, but thts just me. Keep up the good work, I'll be anxious to read it. 5/5

It's painful and tragic... shouldn't happen this way. Anyways... it's a nice poem.