Falling

by jack   Apr 27, 2008


My love dangles on a string
hopelessly free falling
just to be picked up and dropped again

never seeing a end
the light fades and pirouettes through slow motion
as tears dry
and the feeling becomes numb,
usual

losing my breath
pale dusty skin
white washed and brittle,
falling for so long
air now gone

hollow and dead, yet i feel free
free from falling
from the black obis that embraced my world
covered me up and made me numb

empty like a box now
my walls stand strong but are useless
fragile and incomplete the box will remain there
forever
until its picked and held tightly.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    Its really good
    ((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well doen, keep writing x

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Cocks

    Btw that comment was from me...

    Sorry wrong account :S

    x.

  • 16 years ago

    by jack

    Jack this poem is amazing!

    You get more talented each time you write!

    Never stop.

    x.