Suicide note

by trinity   Apr 27, 2008


You said you loved with me
that was one time you lied
you could have saved me
(if you ever tried)
now crimson drips
from my veins
this is my bliss
this numb pain
so now your chance is over
you're way too late
you'ver waited way too long
the night you hit me....that night i caught you
i knew i was gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by An Angel in the Darkness

    Now crimson drips
    from my veins
    this is my bliss
    this numb pain

    Good imagry.... that is your best quality in most of your poems you bring to life what you see in your mind for the rest of us.

  • 16 years ago

    by ScarredToTheBone

    Good emotion, i like "crimson drips" for blood. Good imagery. Its simple yet filling. keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This one is powerful, well done x

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