My Writing Wall... [Thank You]

by unblue skye   Apr 27, 2008


My Writing Wall...
Forgetting it all...
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It'll be hard...
I'm so scarred...
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My Writing Wall...
We all fall...
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I'm drowning in the sorrow...
This will be done tomorrow...
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My Writing Wall...
I hear your call...
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I'm cold, numb...
Here you come...
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My Writing Wall...
You've become tall...
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I use you so much...
I love your touch...
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My Writing Wall...
It's hard to recall...
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You are my savior...
You're the only one who sees this behavior...
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My Writing Wall...
Alone in the hall...
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Upon my wrist,
You exist...
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My Writing Wall...
You see my problems, and so does all...
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--**Skye~
[plz comment and tell me how you like it!!!]

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I actually have a part of my huge room where I write on my wall everyday what is on my mind. some days I put a poem there, some days I draw something. it is actually a cool thing. it is not on the actual wall, it is on this peice of white board I put up that takes up one side of my room. and thanks for the comment 5/5

  • Wow this was very breath taking!!! It actually brought some tears to my eyes haha. I loved it like alot!!! This poem has a punch in it! I am surprised you didnt get any more comments, you deserve it with this master piece!!! Awesome job!!!!

    DantexStone

    5.5

    Want to give higher but you know D8

    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by xxlittleblackrosexx

    I LUV THAT!!! It is soooooo awsome.

    LLAMAS ROX MY SOX!!!!! (u know wat i mean XD)

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Damn Sissy!!! o.o!!! that was so amazing!!! I mean like i enjoyed every EVERY moment of it!!! I was so intense with this, my eyes were keep going everywhere on it!!! The word of choice for your rhyming stanzas were like WONDERFUL!!!!! It just shows so much emotion!!! And it was a good rythm!!! O.o!! keep it up man!!!!

    Good Job
    Glad you Posted this!!
    Just Keep it up man!!!

    LOVE YOU!!!!

    CourtneyxHolland
    SissyxRose

    xxx
    5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    That was really great i like your choice of words keep it up 5/5