Aww wow good flow and well written, keep it up x

That was really great i like your choice of words keep it up 5/5

Damn Sissy!!! o.o!!! that was so amazing!!! I mean like i enjoyed every EVERY moment of it!!! I was so intense with this, my eyes were keep going everywhere on it!!! The word of choice for your rhyming stanzas were like WONDERFUL!!!!! It just shows so much emotion!!! And it was a good rythm!!! O.o!! keep it up man!!!!

Good Job
Glad you Posted this!!
Just Keep it up man!!!

LOVE YOU!!!!

CourtneyxHolland
SissyxRose

xxx
5/5!!

I LUV THAT!!! It is soooooo awsome.

LLAMAS ROX MY SOX!!!!! (u know wat i mean XD)

Wow this was very breath taking!!! It actually brought some tears to my eyes haha. I loved it like alot!!! This poem has a punch in it! I am surprised you didnt get any more comments, you deserve it with this master piece!!! Awesome job!!!!

DantexStone

5.5

Want to give higher but you know D8

<3

I actually have a part of my huge room where I write on my wall everyday what is on my mind. some days I put a poem there, some days I draw something. it is actually a cool thing. it is not on the actual wall, it is on this peice of white board I put up that takes up one side of my room. and thanks for the comment 5/5