I'll Be here forEVER

by abullettotheheart   Apr 27, 2008


Even if you arn't here for me..
you will always have my heart.
you screw everything up .
but i am still going to give you chances.
i feel like you are the one
the right one
i just need to know why you keep giving up?

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  • 16 years ago

    by chaye

    I love the poem exactly how it is

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!! very sweet!.. il ove it!!!..um i think u shuld make 3 changes only.

    1st:
    you screw everything up .
    ^^ say 'screwed'

    2nd:
    but i am still going to give you chances
    ^^ say 'but i am still going to give you a chance.'

    3rd:
    i feel like you are the one
    ^^ i think oyu shuld say 'you're' instead of 'you are'..its more idk i think it makes better sence..

    Love it tho!!!
    Aly

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