Good job.5/5
**harlea

Shit boy. these r good. not lieing. make ur record

To tell you the truth, this reminds me of Eminem [the soldier part] in 8 mile [my fav movie of him].
I did find that song; its by Default. =]

Comment back on some of my poems if you want.

Good luck on your writing career. I wanna meet you sometime when you become famous =]