by Beautiful Forever Apr 27, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I can't disassociate myself from this endless eternity, |
This was a woderfully written poem. It truly touched me in a way I can't explain. It had so much emotion hidden in each line. |
This is deep, but really good, maybe someday when i get older ill write something as well as this. |
by Krayz Lyfe
I know exactly how u feel about the screams i mean i hear screams in my head from everything that surrounds me and the way u put it into words how u put everything into words was just WOW i mean ive been writing for 3 years and i could never explain something so terrible in such a beautiful way if that makes any sense. i mean i have poems about how i want to die and/or escape from all of it but they're not as good as what u have written. you are a really great poet 5/5 |
This poem makes me feel very deeply because I feel that way...I love this poem great usuage of words..5/5 |
I can't disassociate myself from this endless eternity, |