I was captivated by the plot. I could feel the emotion your word choice and flow is just amazing |
by Lindsay
Good write, though it felt very rant/vent ish to me. Not a bad thing in the least, but not what I was expecting. This peom very obviously reflects your stressful time right now, I noticed that you havnt written in a while for the reasons you posted in the forums, and I can see how this poem spawned from that atmosphere. |
by noha
I can't disassociate myself from this endless eternity, |
This is very intense and emotional piece from the beginning to the end. You managed to express feelings on very captivating and sincere way and I believe that many people can interpret this in their own way and relate to some parts of the poem. |
by Allisha
Good poem. You are a great writer. 5/5. |
by michael
I liked it Alot , the words you used were amazing and how you made them flow like it was easy... |
by Lonely Rider
Excellent write... |
I can't disassociate myself from this endless eternity, |
This poem makes me feel very deeply because I feel that way...I love this poem great usuage of words..5/5 |
by Krayz Lyfe
I know exactly how u feel about the screams i mean i hear screams in my head from everything that surrounds me and the way u put it into words how u put everything into words was just WOW i mean ive been writing for 3 years and i could never explain something so terrible in such a beautiful way if that makes any sense. i mean i have poems about how i want to die and/or escape from all of it but they're not as good as what u have written. you are a really great poet 5/5 |
This is deep, but really good, maybe someday when i get older ill write something as well as this. |
This was a woderfully written poem. It truly touched me in a way I can't explain. It had so much emotion hidden in each line. |