Bloody brilliant mate! i love it! and your right i mean i always wonder how they do it. they should allow it on public property (as long as its not like famous cause in italy theres like graffiti on the statues and its kind of wierd). n i like how the verses are different - most poems its like theyre all exactly the same,but in this its more like a song or something, where they rhythms change

Really good one of the best you are a very good writer

WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD... ii ALWAYS WONDERED HOW THEY DO IT TOO AND WHEN I ASKED ONE OF MY FRIENDS SHE SAiiD "EVERY WRiiTER HAS A STORY AND THAT iS HOW THEY TELL iiT..." THEY EXPRESS WHAT THEYVE BEEN THROUGH WiiTH ~ART~ ii LOVE iiT! GREAT POEM =]