Slits

by she   Apr 28, 2008


Don't look at my scars with pity,
I don't deserve it.
don't try to comfort me,
For you see these slits along my wrists,
I've earned them.
Don't say I can live without the blade,
Because what you don't know is the blade is the only way to release this guilt.
So now you see,
I can't change,
These cuts have rightfully invaded my wrists,
So now PLEASE leave,
For you've already wasted to much time on me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is good and your title for this is really really good hunny x

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You deserve a lot more than the pain held within your scars xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent like Brad Pitt said in FIGHT CLUB "Do u wanna die with no scars"? 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm, id otn know hwo i feel , but it is good though , i think you need , more rhyme or style in it , i can understand , that , it si sad moments , but you need to work more on it that is my opignion on it
    !!

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    <3 it!
    it's sad but so relatable!
    5/5.

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