by Lonely Rider Apr 28, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
When the world crashes down, |
WOW, very well worded and I started to tear up at one point. You can tell that you love her very much and that you always will.... your emotions of that refection shine through like the rays of the sun through the lines of this poem. 5/5! |
I can't say I can relate to this poem, but you spoke[wrote] Beautifully!!!! :) 4/5 |