Wow i thinks its really good. I know how this feels. But if you 2 are so into eachother like it sounds like then i think you 2 should dump the guy/girl your with and dtae eachother you 2 are leading eachother on! I say go for it!

Hey there, little lady!

I know it's tough, and hurts like a splinter in the finger and kick in the knee.
But it'll work out, you know. =)
*huggles*

Good poem, though. Full of emotion; very important in the writing of poetry. ;)
Keep up the fantastic work, and hang in there, alrighty?

<3

IT WAS OKAY I DIDNT REALLY FIND THE RYTHM BUT YEHA!... SO ITS A 3.0 BUT THAT IS REALLY NICE TI=O HEAR YOU LOVE HIM THIS MUCH WHO MAKES YOU OPEN UP...
IT TAKES TIME TO GET SOMEONES HEART.

Wow, i like what you've added to this poem. it makes perfect sence. I think when that person and you are finnally together, you should add even more to it to make it kind of like a timeline. 5/5

Whats meant to be will be? you never know x

good poem xxxx