AWWW , touching !
This poem starts from a lovely meaning
"Subtract the outer exterior of me
and see the painful sight to see"
SEE the inner broken soul wow ! amazing thats what I have written a poem on it and I would like to dedicate you a verse of my poem , here it goes ,,,

Who tries to understand those
Who laugh with hidden tears like a clown

And Dustin this sentence of ur poem is also very touching
"I can't be who everyone wants me to be"
Lovely
A vote for u!
Cheers
Biya

THis poem is really good filled with emotions but very good loved it and how you expressed yourself.
5/5
Fabulous Job!!!