by Lonely Rider
This is another beautiful write from you... |
Personally I don't prefer AABB rhyme scheme but here it worked well. Your choice of words is fantastic in every stanza and whole poem is truly powerful. I would put this in dark or sad category but maybe I just don't interpret it well. |
by Nix
I like your title, very simple and remarkable. |
by Ash
The imagery behind this one was simply awesome and your choice of words was so intense that it made the poem seem more than just real. The flow also added to the feelings that revolved deep within this one. Each line and each stanza was filled with so much emotions that it's hard for the reader not to relive those images too. 5/5 |
by noha
Its good and i like the first 2 stanze more and as its more flow and rhyme,but the feeling over all is good, i like it ,keep write |