Daddy,...

by Asher   Apr 28, 2008


Daddy,
I thought you loved me,
I thought you cared,
But why is it when i look at you,
I feel so scared,

PLEASE PLEASE,

Except me,
Love me,
Am I asking to much,
Or it it you don't care,
I've change for you,
Now its your move,
take a turn,
Oh i forgot,
You don't care,
I'm sorry daddy,
but I thought you were still here,
but now you open my eyes,
Now realizing you were never there.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice poem i liked it alot. u put emotion into it and thats what makes any poem good. i liked the flow and ur ending! i think ur a good writer keep it up! (dont let ne tall u different) 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Except me, = accept xx

    Or it it you don't care, = you repeated the word it think one should be is xx

    good poem, keep writing xx

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