Comments : Daddy,...

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Except me, = accept xx

    Or it it you don't care, = you repeated the word it think one should be is xx

    good poem, keep writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice poem i liked it alot. u put emotion into it and thats what makes any poem good. i liked the flow and ur ending! i think ur a good writer keep it up! (dont let ne tall u different) 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23