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by Steph Apr 28, 2008 category : Life, society / other
Thanks for the comment on the last version of this Fredy, so here's the completed poem! Why do you always do this? Don't you know it's driving me insane Every time you do it You're pushing me away You want me to respect you How can I? You won't let me see him So I go behind your back If you let me Then I wouldn't do it But please understand He's different to the rest You tried to tell me But did i listen? Oh no! I had to do it for myself I wish I would have listened I wish you would have made me For now I know He was just like all the rest
by Fredy
The flow works amazingly great is quite interesting how you realize at the end what people pointed at the beginning... great work
by Andrew
Nice poem, really like the message behind it and the way it flows. Keep up the good work.