Why

by Steph   Apr 28, 2008


Thanks for the comment on the last version of this Fredy, so here's the completed poem!

Why do you always do this?
Don't you know it's driving me insane
Every time you do it
You're pushing me away

You want me to respect you
How can I?
You won't let me see him
So I go behind your back

If you let me
Then I wouldn't do it
But please understand
He's different to the rest

You tried to tell me
But did i listen?
Oh no!
I had to do it for myself

I wish I would have listened
I wish you would have made me
For now I know
He was just like all the rest

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fredy

    The flow works amazingly great is quite interesting how you realize at the end what people pointed at the beginning... great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Nice poem, really like the message behind it and the way it flows. Keep up the good work.