Broken pieces of my heart

by rek   Apr 28, 2008


Broken pieces of my heart
i keep collecting them on my part

with the belief u"ll come some day
hold me in our arms and will say

dear..i still love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Short, sweet and to-the-point. Beautiful work. The only thing that bugs me is the "u"ll " should be "you'll" but don't mind that. It's just my OCD-ness. Excellent job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful and very sweet... short and simply caprivating...in jus few words u said everything...

    excellent work..

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hold me in our arms and will say =your*

    good job xxx

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