I love it :) 5/5
absolutely positive amazing

I LOVE this, i seriously think u should like write a book or something, there were so many touching quotes in here, you're very good at dialogue, keep writing 5/5

Awsome poem. I could totlly relate to it and picture it. 4/5

That was a very good poem, im sure many people can relate. I think this poem will help a lot of people get through any abuse they might be subject to and see a brighter future ahead. great job =)

Very intense, and emotional. you did not deserve to be treated that way. it was really brilliant...keep up the great work

5/5

I love this its an amazing poem - really held my attention =) nice write!

Thz peice wuz GREAT i really like it.. So deep... 5/5

Everyone said it all GREAT JOB!!!

Tabi,

Giving a person like that a second chance is something a lot of women would not do..
You described all that happened to great detai and to tell you the truth..I would have walked away from a guy like that without ever looking back!
I hope he knows he is a very lucky person to have someone who is able to forgive him for what he did...

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

"You just won't stand up for yourself, its just to hard huh?
I mean, I waisted four months on you deciding what to do.
It's not my fault your ashamed of the way you feel.
I can't begin to understand why I bothered with you."
>1st line: Ok, for this one, "its" should be "it's"
>2nd : "waisted" is spelled wrong, should be "wasted"
>4th : you might want to add an "even" in between "I" and "bothered" it expresses the emotion more.

"Look, if you think you have waisted so much of your"
>Again, "waisted" should be "wasted"

He replied slyly:
"Well that's no surprise because your"
>"your" should be "you're"

This poem makes a good story and it was easy to read and to understand. It was also a good length. I gave it a 5/5

Wow an amazing poem with great depth!
xo