Debbie
What a great piece you have written for the title challenge. The imagery is so wonderful I can see the stones from Stonehenge in my mind.

Alignments marking passage
Seasons through the mist
Bluestones rift with magic
From Merlin's dark abyss

Your word choices help to paint the picture for the readers. Letting the reader see this mystical place through your eyes.

Awesome !
Love Cindy

Wow... I've always wanted to visit Stonehenge... Your poem is amazingly vivid, with such remarkable descriptions. I could imagine every stanza unfolding in front of me and reading this piece is definitely fantastic experience.
Your choice of words and flow are great as always in your poems.

- Walk among the ruins
Crest of barrrows swell
Silent ancient sentries stare
Faint echoes thrill the dell-
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You have a spelling error here, in the word 'barrow', you wrote it 'barrrow". Other than that, this is great intro to this piece, it pulled me straight into the poem.

- Sarsen shadows lengthen
Summer Solstice gleams
Lichen dappled minions
Druid's lingering dreams-
^^^
Your choice of words here is fantastic. The imagery is breathtaking... this stanza also posses mystical atmosphere and great beauty.

- Alignments marking passage
Seasons through the mist
Bluestones rift with magic
From Merlin's dark abyss-
^^^
This is my favorite stanza. It has flawless flow and stunning, so vivid imagery. "Bluestones rift with magic"...wow... I fell in love with that line.

- Walk among the ruins
Cool lintel's horseshoe door
Staid circles mark eternity
Mystery o'er the moor-
^^^
The repetition of the first line from the beginning is truly effective. This is great ending, but I didn't wanted it to end so fast...

Overall, another amazing piece from you. This is refreshing and original, truly captivating write.

Debbie,

Such beautiful words you have used!
I could almost picture myself walking amongst those huge stones!

Bravo!

Hugs,

Ingrid

^Walk among the ruins
Crest of barrows swell
Silent ancient sentries stare
Faint echoes thrill the dell^

Enchanting stanza. The word choice, imagery and flow are impeccable.

^Sarsen shadows lengthen
Summer Solstice gleams
Lichen dappled minions
Druid's lingering dreams^

Articulate and creative. Clever word choice int his stanza!

^Alignments marking passage
Seasons through the mist
Bluestones rift with magic
From Merlin's dark abyss^

Good portrayal of the magic and mystery of Stone Henge.

^Walk among the ruins
Cool lintel's horseshoe door
Staid circles mark eternity
Mystery o'er the moor^

Excellent ending to a brilliant piece!

Wow, I love this poem. It deals with a lot of the stuff that I love to read about. The flow was excellent and the rhyme scheme was nice. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

You've captured the mystery. (:

Wow great job! 5/5

Monolith stones of ancient time, blue stones
for all to shine, the different polarity for all to see. On mound we stood together just you and me.
Sacred ancient ground we stopped and stared in awe .... big standing stone so tall.....
I captured the beauty....... lost in all

It's difficult to pick my favorite stanza - because they're all wonderful. Your work is...genteel.