by Perfectly Broken Apr 28, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Can you hear the words I'll never say? |
by Baby Rainbow
Good opening xx well written poem xx keep writing xxx |
by Haleigh
Wow this is one of the bests ive read today also sound like theyd make good lyrics to a song. Its really personal and brilliant. 5/5 |
by VSambulance
You say you're only 15? Wow, you're on your way to becoming a great writer. Just the flow of your poems was great. You must be really hurting on the inside, because I know what that situation feels like. Great job. |
by munkee04
WOW!!! I really like this poem...its great!!!...i guess i just like the words you used...mostly i liked the last part, that one was great!...And i like it cause its something thats so true..you know a lot of people go through that all the time, where they like someone, but that person just sees you as a friend...Great poem Lost and Broken...5/5!... |
I think everyone can relate to these words, and you expressed them well. Expressing feelings is probably one of the most difficult things you can go through, but your writing seems to help express yourself. Keep writing. 5/5 |