Wonderful write... your poem has both the ingredients of desperation as well as it is touching...

"Can you see the words that pour out from my eyes?
The hurt and anger spilling from my cries.
Don't you notice all the smiles shot your way?
But most of all..
Can you hear all the words, that I will [never] say.. "

^^ i really loved this stanza...beautifully written..

the second stanza is not that strong compared to others... bt overall very nicely written..

I think everyone can relate to these words, and you expressed them well. Expressing feelings is probably one of the most difficult things you can go through, but your writing seems to help express yourself. Keep writing. 5/5

WOW!!! I really like this poem...its great!!!...i guess i just like the words you used...mostly i liked the last part, that one was great!...And i like it cause its something thats so true..you know a lot of people go through that all the time, where they like someone, but that person just sees you as a friend...Great poem Lost and Broken...5/5!...

You say you're only 15? Wow, you're on your way to becoming a great writer. Just the flow of your poems was great. You must be really hurting on the inside, because I know what that situation feels like. Great job.

Wow this is one of the bests ive read today also sound like theyd make good lyrics to a song. Its really personal and brilliant. 5/5

Good opening xx well written poem xx keep writing xxx