Ahah i like this poem... it made me wonder but i do believe theres is a heaven, cause miricles just dont happen. they are gifts from god.

i like the word that were used even though i am not real good with my vocab yet lol. but it was spactacular!

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5/5

I'm a christian so of course to answer your questions.. yes. There is a heaven and hell, but that's beside the point. Lol. I love this poem, because you make the reader think.. is there really life beyond this world? Is there life after death? It just makes a really good poem.. wondering.

No inferno burns below us,

^^ I love how you used the word "inferno" instead of just saying hell or some other common word. Very descriptive.

Keep writing!
Cayce

That is very thought provoking, creates many questions about the world around us, is that your intention? Hope so. You achieved it EXTREMELY well. 5/5