Things change

by MELI   Apr 29, 2008


Things change
but you gotta move on
no matter how much it hurts
no matter whats wrong

things change
you've got to be tough
no matter how hard
no matter how rough

things change
people change too
but you got to wipe off your tears
and sometimes start new

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not finished please help!! =/

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Short and sweet and to the point ,I give it a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    OKay, first I would break it up into 4 stanzes at least to edit it, then I would check my word useage(like line 11 you meant to use "off" not "of") or even just "you've got to wipe your tears"
    Last stanza change to:
    Things change
    So that is the mystery
    If I am your girl
    Then we must make history

    Give it some thought.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Good poem i really like it but i think you need to change the ending as you suggest

    hmm...i don't have anything in my mind for now but why not use sentence ending with strife for the last line?

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