I Don't Mean To Be Rude

by Robbiez EMO Heart and Soul   Apr 29, 2008


Pardon my manors
I don't mean to offend
But i see how you love her
I know it's pretend
Do you even care
Do you have emotions
That you play with her feelings
And steal her devotions
Are really that selfish
Are you really that crude
I have no place to speak
I don't mean to be rude
But you make me feel queasy
And a little bit sick
How you care about nothing
Are you really that thick
It's somewhat revolting
The way that you work
And though it sounds rude
I think you're a jerk

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I'm very sure I know who this one is about, sir. Heh... I rhymed.
    I love the flow. It really helps with the rhyming part.

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Wow, great poem and great flow too, kinda made me laugh (in a good way!) thanks for sharing

    suicidal love xx