Summer heat(Haiku)

by Lonely Rider   Apr 29, 2008


Resplendent Fireball,
Bedecking the summer sky;
ohh!! this Scorching heat..

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Ahh another perfect haiku of yours. Nicely written and almost humorous to me. As usual it was greatly enjoyed. I absoulutely loved the vocab as it makes the reader stop and savor the poem instead of just rushing through it. I mean lets face it, how often do you see resplendent in poems?? anyways the last line was an unexpected and humorous ending making the whole piece excellent. well done