by Lonely Rider Apr 29, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Resplendent Fireball, |
Ahh another perfect haiku of yours. Nicely written and almost humorous to me. As usual it was greatly enjoyed. I absoulutely loved the vocab as it makes the reader stop and savor the poem instead of just rushing through it. I mean lets face it, how often do you see resplendent in poems?? anyways the last line was an unexpected and humorous ending making the whole piece excellent. well done |