Comments : Only 17

  • 16 years ago

    by maya

    It's such a sad poem... :(

  • 16 years ago

    by Coco Bean

    WOW!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    She lay there in the road
    with her sleeves rolled up
    and in her last breath she whispered
    see what you have done?

    loved this verse. loved the ending, great poem really powerful. well done xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    So sad but a great poem