- A rose without an alluring scent,
An aurora without the shine,
A smile without any of the joy.-
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These lines sum up this poem excellently. This is my favorite part of the piece, beautifully descriptive and powerful.

Overall, I like this poem a lot. You expressed emotions on a great way and this is truly intense and creative from the beginning to the end. I like your choice of words along with very vivid imagery that you portrayed.

Greatly done
5/5