Im sorry for all the spelling mistakes and extra words
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they= the
and happy in gods happy care- no happy after god

Awwwww this is so moving it really is, you have touched my heart with this and brought tears to my eyes, this poem was simply from the heart and it flowed so weel. so deep so sad.

really good job and big hugs to you, thank you for sharing this painful poem xxxxxx

Awww i really like this!!!*****
much love!!
XxJust Another GirlxX

Wow I had goosebumps reading that poem. Being a mother myself I could never imagine losing a child. That was so well written. You have a lot of talent.
Very good work :-)