Shinning bright

by Candy Rain   Apr 29, 2008


After the romantic kiss
You told me close my eyes you got me a gift
I was surprised by the beautiful sight
Because when I opened my eyes it was shinning bright
Right in front of me was the best ring
It wasnt much but it was much
Everyday I think of that night
I think of that beautiful sight
The sight of that bright ring of mines

(please tell me what you think)

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  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Awww this is a sweeeeeet poem! lol awesome awesome but change "told" to "hold" and at the end...change "mines" to "mine" :) but awesome poem and great story

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