by RobinAnn13 Apr 29, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
----just in-case, I need to say that *word* means that word/sentence was said by someone else |
by Not Enough
This is a really sad poem. I don't think the flow was as good as the other ones. But it's still excellent. At first I didn't understand it, but I got to the second one and it was very understandable. I like the uniqueness of the poe; by that I mean the style of the writing. The way you made the first line of each stanza someone talking. |
by Baby Rainbow
Good job xxxx |