The eyes of Fire

by BrieAnna   Apr 30, 2008


Your eyes are of ash
and your cheeks are of snow
You act rather rash
oh, didn't you know

wondrous summers, and beautiful nights
the leafs are all falling
so turn off the lights

Your eyes are now amber
So dark and deep red
your eyes are of fire
and I know My tears shouldn't be shed

You were once love, peace and life
but Now I will just lift my knife
I cut not my skin, nor my hair
I only cut my mind, ripping and shredding what was once there.

I have lost what i was
And I don't really care
The pain is inside
this is not fair

My eyes are now empty
they were once blue
my cheeks are now pale
without my dear you

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  • 16 years ago

    by 1

    Absolutly amazing...very well written and great emotions 5/5...take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenzi

    This is a beautiful poem darling, I shall add it to my favorites, well done! :]
    I hope you don't stop writing, it'd be a shame.
    Beautifully done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Wow. This was a really good poem. It was very sad, but very well-written. I love the style and the flow of it. It was kind of cryptic, but I think that just added to it. Nice job.

    Skye

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    "You were once love, peace and life
    but Now I will just lift my knife
    I cut not my skin, nor my hair
    I only cut my mind, ripping and shredding what was once there."
    Beautiful you should write more poetry great job 5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I have lost what i was
    And I don't really care
    The pain is inside
    this is not fair

    much much like these words,
    i feel same way , worderfull way to put the words,

    hope to see more of tehse expression of teh words,

    but i think it can handle more refining :)

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