Only time can tell....

by BeMusEd   Apr 30, 2008


Only time can tell
When it will end?
...all these fighting against cruelty of life
...all these troubles and grief

Only time can tell
When it will end?
...all these sufferings
...all these crying
...and when to stops these enormous torment

Only time can tell
On what the future awaits us?
...all these uncertainty enfold us
...all these vanity that twine us

Only time can tell
...if we can still persist and prolong these fights
...if in the end, we can grasp the victory we always run to

And only time can tell
When does the harmony will reign us?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    'Only time can tell"

    Good use of your title in your first stanza.

    "Only time can tell
    When it will end?
    ...all these sufferings
    ...all these crying
    ...and when to stops these enormous torment"

    I like your repetition of "Only time will tell? When will it end" In every stanza. Very good Consistency

    "Only time can tell
    On what the future awaits us?"

    It sounds nice how you changed it from "When will it end" To "On what future awaits us?"

    "And only time can tell
    When does the harmony will reign us? "

    I like your ending, its powerful yet simple which makes a great contrast in this poem. Very good work, keep it up! You should check out some of my poetry sometime.

  • 16 years ago

    by kyrah

    Nice poem...keep it up :D

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