I love these little poems. Haha. They just flow so well, and each word makes such an impact since you're only allowed one per line. I love the topic you wrote about. Which I'm pretty sure writing [wether it be poems or any other type of writing]. |
by Paralyzed
Your first 3 words throw me off, though I do like them, they don't flow together like the rest of the words following. I thought it was a good description of inspiration and how we come to it, but just that first part doesn't work for me. Good job otherwise. |
For one word a line you choose excellent words. Liked it alot. |