Hear Me(say something about this poem please)

Do ghosts ever leave,
if i become, will i get relief,
hold my breath for me Jesus,
so i can save it longer
and Jesus Christ im not scared to die
im scared of what comes after,
will i meat you at the golden gates,
or will i be condemned to wait,
if is your will and i cant change it
ive read the bible and i cant commit,
im not weak im just broken,
lonely is what scares me the most,
ill write to you but do you see ghosts,
Jesus let me look threw your eyes
and watch what happens when i die
i hope my soul is tougher than my skin
so the devil cant come in
and if its not Jesus save me now
cause my sins are too great and my hearts too close to the ground.